We showcased our first drafts to our class and certain other A2 Media Studies students to get constructive feedback so that improvements could be made.
Below are the comments which were received after this showcase.
Positives:
- Lip-syncing was well executed
- Performance was very believable
- Variety of shots/angles worked well
- The confidence in Sophie, as an actor, was shown, therefore making the performance effective
- The lighting in the music video was appropriate and showed the shot clearly
- The narrative was easy to follow
- Very sharp and great edits "to the beat" during fast sections + good variety of edits
- Camera movement and placement was effective
- Black and white worked "well" and suited the track and narrative
- Good use of symbolism "mannequin"
- Pan and zoom shot was very effective
Constructive Feedback points:
- Pre-song material - track wasn't appropriate
- Sophie smiles at the end of the "window scene"
- "Fuzzy" bit at the start where the screen goes shaky - this problem happened during the capturing process
- Photo album - could be more specific and show who is in them. Ambiguity works well though.
This feedback was all collected by teenagers who are the all the same age (17/18). This is only a small fraction of our specfic target group, therefore more audience feedback plans to be collected.
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